Comments for Real Writing http://www.realwriting.us/home Web home of Robert Young, author and writing consultant Sat, 04 Feb 2012 06:29:23 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 Comment on More Poems by Sung Won http://www.realwriting.us/home/2012/01/more-poems/#comment-143 Sung Won Sat, 04 Feb 2012 06:29:23 +0000 http://www.realwriting.us/home/?p=607#comment-143 I totally agree I totally agree

]]> Comment on More Poems by Sung Won http://www.realwriting.us/home/2012/01/more-poems/#comment-142 Sung Won Sat, 04 Feb 2012 06:28:25 +0000 http://www.realwriting.us/home/?p=607#comment-142 Great job! Great job!

]]> Comment on Poetry by Sung Won http://www.realwriting.us/home/2012/01/poetry/#comment-141 Sung Won Sat, 04 Feb 2012 06:27:04 +0000 http://www.realwriting.us/home/?p=596#comment-141 Poem Hard, hard to think Sometimes comes in your mind, Sometimes doesn't Sometimes challeging, but fun Poem

Hard, hard to think
Sometimes comes in your mind,
Sometimes doesn’t
Sometimes challeging, but fun

]]> Comment on And Life Goes On by Conrad Bradford http://www.realwriting.us/home/2011/12/and-life-goes-on/#comment-140 Conrad Bradford Fri, 03 Feb 2012 21:41:21 +0000 http://www.realwriting.us/home/?p=589#comment-140 TOUGH Im tough their is nothing tougher out their. Im tough I can kill a bear. Im tough Ill do anything you dare. Im tough about safety I don't really care. Im tough their is nothing I can't scare. Im tough their is nothing tougher out there. !IM TOUGH! TOUGH
Im tough their is nothing tougher out their.
Im tough I can kill a bear.
Im tough Ill do anything you dare.
Im tough about safety I don’t really care.
Im tough their is nothing I can’t scare.
Im tough their is nothing tougher out there.
!IM TOUGH!

]]> Comment on More Poems by areswhy http://www.realwriting.us/home/2012/01/more-poems/#comment-139 areswhy Thu, 02 Feb 2012 19:56:34 +0000 http://www.realwriting.us/home/?p=607#comment-139 Me too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Me too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> Comment on More Poems by Devyn E.L. Dixon http://www.realwriting.us/home/2012/01/more-poems/#comment-138 Devyn E.L. Dixon Thu, 02 Feb 2012 19:14:04 +0000 http://www.realwriting.us/home/?p=607#comment-138 I love writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> Comment on Poetry by Devyn E.L. Dixon http://www.realwriting.us/home/2012/01/poetry/#comment-137 Devyn E.L. Dixon Wed, 01 Feb 2012 03:16:13 +0000 http://www.realwriting.us/home/?p=596#comment-137 People by Devyn Dixon. People, so very different yet so similar. We all are so unique yet we all need water. How could we survive without one another? People by Devyn Dixon. People, so very different yet so similar. We all are so unique yet we all need water. How could we survive without one another?

]]> Comment on More Poems by Eunjin Seock http://www.realwriting.us/home/2012/01/more-poems/#comment-136 Eunjin Seock Mon, 30 Jan 2012 21:55:38 +0000 http://www.realwriting.us/home/?p=607#comment-136 Korea Korea is a very small country. Korea x 96 = America. It's small. But inside Korea there are lot's of great things. We have symbols, a flag with lots of colors, food - bibimbab and Kimchi. Yum! The outside is small but inside is big That's Korea! Korea

Korea is a very small country.
Korea x 96 = America. It’s small.
But inside Korea there are lot’s of great things.
We have symbols,
a flag with lots of colors,
food – bibimbab and Kimchi. Yum!
The outside is small but inside is big
That’s Korea!

]]> Comment on Poetry by Devyn E.L. Dixon http://www.realwriting.us/home/2012/01/poetry/#comment-135 Devyn E.L. Dixon Mon, 30 Jan 2012 21:51:29 +0000 http://www.realwriting.us/home/?p=596#comment-135 Awsome Ashia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awsome Ashia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> Comment on More Poems by Devyn E.L. Dixon http://www.realwriting.us/home/2012/01/more-poems/#comment-134 Devyn E.L. Dixon Mon, 30 Jan 2012 21:48:08 +0000 http://www.realwriting.us/home/?p=607#comment-134 Everyone deserves Everyone wants Everyone feels...PEACE Everyone deserves Everyone wants Everyone feels...LOVE Everyone deserves Everyone wants Everyone feels...FREEDOM No one should be judged for how they look, same with a book. No one should be judged for where they came, to do that to someone would be mean and lame. We ALL deserve equal rights, any other way would start many fights and give me awful frights. Everyone deserves
Everyone wants
Everyone feels…PEACE

Everyone deserves
Everyone wants
Everyone feels…LOVE

Everyone deserves
Everyone wants
Everyone feels…FREEDOM

No one should be judged for how they look, same with a book.
No one should be judged for where they came, to do that to someone would be mean and lame.
We ALL deserve equal rights, any other way would start many fights and give me awful frights.

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